Moriah Leila

Hey there, I liked this poem, it was very festive! Definitely brings back memories when I was a child and how difficult it was to fall asleep on Christmas Eve. ...

Hey there, great poem! I really liked how you talk about absorbing the music. Sometimes I do that, when I am listening to a great song. This poem really spoke ...

I think you should probably write when you are more rested. Wow, that came out a lot meaner than I meant. What I mean is that, you are obviously a ...

I really enjoyed this. I liked how you pointed out that beauty is superficial and that you will never be pleased with something so fickle. I thought you wrote this ...

Wow, this poem basically disgusted me. I am sure that was what you were going for, and you did a good job. I have a hard time giving you criticism ...

This poem was interesting to read. I liked how you made the angel out to be both fierce but also kind. Some of your lines were quite brilliant (runs with ...

I thought this was a good poem. It gave me a great insight into who you are as a person. As I pointed out before, punctuate your poems just like ...

Okay, I originally thought, aw a cute poem for her friend. Except it kind of turned out where you were talking about yourself the whole time. Sure you mentioned that ...

This was a cute poem. Very brief and to the point. My only real critique was the second to last line. You wrote: You can keep my heart And for ...

Wow, this is a very powerful poem. I mean, you're dealing with a lot of heavy issues here. And I felt like you just kind of skimmed over them, emotionally. ...

So seriously, this poem was like a love/hate relationship for me. There were parts that I absolutely loved and there were other parts that I hated. I want to sit ...

Yeah Jak, I think you should do something about making this more clear. Because I really thought you had just put a jumble of words together and expected it to ...

I thought it a lovely poem. Your ryhming didn't feel forced and the overall idea was cohesive. You did have some great lines, and I actually liked the line about ...

I thought this was an interesting poem. People can rely so heavily on simple things to relieve them of the mediocrity of their lives, even if it is a silly ...

I agree with Empress, I totally didn't see the Dad coming into this. I just thought it was another angsty teenaged poem about teenaged love, but the Dad part made ...